i alrdy included all e good stuffs..
minimal use of negative words..
supported my claims wif data..
use headers for skim value..
and yet oso not ok..
her comment oso dun wat she tokin..
ask her liao..
she explain oso still dun really uds..
just re-did my assignment..
i just hope i will do well for sat's midterm..
pls passs!!
